Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give any more detail on?
Yes I believe that there are areas of my presentation that I would like to give more detail on. The main areas would be, being more enthusiastic when I am presenting my pitch, I say this because during my pitch I believe that I was quite laid back. So if I was to do my presentation again I would much like to add more enthusiasm into my presentation as it shows a lot of respect and good work.
What did your audience identify as the strengths of your music video idea?
The audience identified the brand identity being used in the song as a strength of the video as the artist creates a good gesture when he raps the main lyric of the song. The audience did identify the two rappers as a strength as they both fit the roles.
What did your audience identify as areas for imorovement?
The audience identified that the locations were very minimal meaning that I should add more locations into my video. They also identified that I should add more cast members into the video as I only had two people appearing in the video which is very minimal to find in a normal music video.
What changes will you make to your music video concept based on the feedback you received?
The changes that I will make to my music video concept based on the feedback that I received will most likely be changing the story line of what goes on in the video as my story line for the video was very basic, as it was basic it meant that it wouldn't really make a well made music video as it would look quite boring and simple, so I will change the story line and put more time into thinking of as better concept, I will also make different changes as I will add more locations to be used in the video as I only have two locations being used in my video, the more locations the more entertaining and well made the project will look.
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